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Okay, I was honestly expecting the "Beast" to be Kero, not Ruby and Spinner, but, oh well. Let me guess, their next stop is(drum role please!)....The Bog Of Eternal Stench! Always a delightful sequence, yet without a "Ludo" it will definitely be different. But at least I'll get to see if my guess for Sir Didymus's "stand in" is accurate or not. Laters.

I really like your story. Actually, I like it more than Pleasure Slave, if only because I like the setting better. Please update soon. With smex, if possible.

This last chapter WINS! Spinel and Ruby are far more funny than ol' boring Kero and Yue XD
I'm just wondering where Yue was that he didn't notice that the monster almost eats his prey! Pun!
Hopefully there would be a face off, where Yue shows her who owns Touya. Although I wouldnt mind her owning the boy at least once, either XD
As a good YuexTouya fan I should hate her, but I can't, she is just too cool. The fact that she has breast, though, scares me -_-

personally i think that the Yue in the labrynth is more cruel so far, maybe thats because in Pleasure Slave by the end Yue was almost 100% nice....but anyway- GOOD Job!! i like the plot of it and how Tomoyo and Sakura are friends...~.~

We'll find out which Yue is worse when Touya meets up with him again. The one that's the cruelest during smex wins! XD Haha. But I can't wait for an update. You're the only good Yue x Touya author out there. I luuuuves you. ^_~

Ah, yes, the peach of forgetfulness, such a fascinating sequence it was, and it'll be interesting to see what you do with it. Fascinating choice of alternate motivation for Li to give it to him, too, getting to keep his sword and being given pretty little Sakura rather than being threatened with the Bog Of Eternal Stench. And just let me guess who the horrible beast in that particular part of the labyrinth is.... I also have an odd idea as to who to expect in the place of Sir Didymus, though I'll wait until you get to that point.

And as to the "Who's more evil, PS Yue or Labyrinth Yue," well we must consider that the latter is modeled to a degree off of the Goblin King Jareth, so of course he's more evil! Let's not be silly. Laters.

Oh, yeah, almost forgot, liked Sakura's new dress and barrette's very pretty. Okay, not a wedding dress, whew... Okay, I'm done now, till chapter 6, then. Laters.(again.)

Labyrinth Yue seems to have a wicked sense of humor that PS Yue never showed. I like that XD
I wonder where Li is going to lose Touya so that he can accept Yue's offer :P

amazing amzing amazing!!it lovely to read from you again!i love this story so far. i like yue giving sakura a necklace. nice touch!!:Pi havent seen the movie so im really excited to read your story!!!and i no this story will be just as good as PS

silvergirlrox

Yes, it's rare to see Syaoran cowtowing to anyone, but Yue is definitely a special case. Though I'm thinking we're gonna hop back over to Sakura for a bit next, yes? Well, I look forward to it. Laters!