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Well, it's diverged already in that you used those hidden directions in the fountains, the dog "knocker", no two guys doing the "One of always tells the truth and the other always lies" riddle, using that slide puzzle instead, and of course, omitting the "helping hands", as well as the rather interesting introduction of Tomoyo. Why do I get the impression she's making a wedding dress? Oh, yeah, this just gets better and better! Laters.

Oh my god I remember this story I read it before! its what got me into loving Touya X Yue. I love it

yay! you're putting other stuff up! and i did like ps a lot better than this so far, but i think that's because i liked the originality. i know that it was written second to this, so i can understand why it probably isn't as good nor as original since you wrote this to awaken the dreaded plot bunnies. keep updating it, i can't wait to see the ccs twist on one of my favorite movies! ja ne!

You just had to do the worm bit, didn't you? Stupid, stupid, evil worm! Otherwise, neat. So Li's gonna take on Hoggle's role, eh? Okay. Liked the meeting of Sakura and Yue, too, necklace gift was a nice touch. Definitely not Henson's Labyrinth, that's for sure. I await chapter 3. Laters.

well, Touya isnt as curious as he seemed. He should have at least asked what was on the other end of the road!
But it would have been boring for him to get to the castle already XD
Lovely scene with sakura and yue, especially the necklace.

i love the concept u have and knew that even though the story beggings the same the dynamics are different please update soon

lovin the story u should continue and have the chapters longer and more suspenseful. started out great and has a good storyline.

I for one have not seen said movie, so I am really looking forward to read this story!
Thanks for posting this capitalist!! ^_^

Luckily for you, I've loved Labyrinth since I was a kid. (Dark Crystal, too, but that's another story entirely.) So far, very good start, and obviously it won't be mindless plagiarism - a. the genders of the seeker and the sought are reversed, b. Sakura is 10 years old rather then 10 months(or so), and c. you're posting it here at AFF rather than at FF, so that alone makes it hugely different from the word go! I eagerly await the next chapter! Laters!

Its just so very nice to be able to read some other work from you. I totally think that you could just go in to writing and become a novelist. Your writing lvl is that high and I read alot of books in the library and stores.
Thank you for sharing with us your talent. I do hope that it'll take you far even if now your doing it as a side hobby.
Keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait to finsh this one. I loved the movie The Labyrinth when I was younger. I'm excited to see what you have instored for this story in all your mighty creativity.
Thanks again!