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for Honey Pot

by Hestia

person obelisk
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fic is GOOD! I personally don't really fancy Naruse so I'm so EXCITED you made him so slutty and pathetic in this fic! And Hide rocks! XDDDD I really want to read more of this so by all means, PLEASE CONTINUE!!! ^^
person foxfirek
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was awesome. I really didn't know how you were going to make things work between those too but it came together really well. Those two made an amazing couple and it was perfect how naruse seemed to like the punishments which made them a perfect couple
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm adding my opinion on how to end this and 'After the Dresses Are Gone'. I think you should just end them with quick epilogues. I like many of your other stories so much more (mostly the newest PoT fic) and I'd like you to focus on them. But that's just me.

schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I've reviewed one of your stories but I read them all the time. The Naruto fandom is my favorite, but I just finished watching Gakuen Heaven and immediately set off to find some hot fics - I was so happy to see that you'd written one that I started it right away. It was fantastic. So hot! In any case, I'm a big fan of yours in general, but it always seems like whatever I want to say has already been said 10 or 20 times lol. So, thanks for all the fics - I love them and wait for any and all new ones from you with baited breath.
person yellow22
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Thanks!
person hidexyuki
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm amazed, Hide and Yuki both loosing control, they're HOT! please update soon ;)
person Mikkigg
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story. I have only read the Manga, not seen the anime, but I love this story (in the manga King and Keita are together). I have already read it twice now. You have a great writing style, I beta-read and this is great work. These two together are so perfect that I couldn't see them with anyone else now. I would love for you to do another one. I am good at begging...would that help?
person oztan
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hope you write more Gakuen Heaven. I like to see Niwa/Saionji fictions.
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, are we done? That would be a perfect place to end but another chapter might be nice...

I just loved this chapter. The ending was so sweet!
person llyoung
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely fantastic. Loved everything. Wonderful chapter. The fantasies were so hot and so was the actual sex. Loved them in the car, the restuarant, the hotel. Sorry I'm a little incoherent right now - the chapter was just that good.

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