rate_review Reviews

I have read this story twice already. You should really update, I really like where this is going. Brock is usually cast off as either an idiot, going out with a chick way younger than him or a closet gay. I like what you are doing because he is neither of those. He is what you say, great at domestic skills and hardworking, attributes that older women would look for in men as opposed to looks. That and we all know that Brock is into older women. Why this hasn't been done before is beyond me quite frankly and makes way more sense that Brock deciding to bone Ash out of the blue.

Now is Brock's time to shine. I think have him screw around with a few women (and get in some close calls with husbands!) before finally settling down with Deliha. This is a good story and it would be shame if it were not continued.

This is looking really interesting... keep it up!

It's been almost a year since this was updated, but a big part of me hopes that you continue it someday. It's so well-written and the characterisation is lovely.

Booya, that was beautiful baby.

Can't wait to see what you got in store for us next.

I love a good adult story involving Mrs. Ketchum as much as the next guy. Of course, with Brock's line, "Let's get cooking!", I could totally picture her coming down wearing a g-string, an apron, and nothing else.

Anyway, I can't wait to see Delia get it (and get it good). Keep up the good work!

Black Whole - Yes, I posted this on ff.net, too, among other places. I gots to get me my coverage!

Well it was short but i loved this new chapter hope the wait for the next one is'nt so long because this is a great fic cant wait to see wher it goes in later chapters.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

This seem like it's going to be a good fic the first chapter was well written and one other thing it's nice to see a story about Delia she doesn't get enough fics about her looking forward to an update soon

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae