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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH my.
oh DEAR!
oh. my. dear.
This was great. a little more of the cuff humor than the last. very weird how the quirky humor is working with such a serious subject. i mean Sanzo finding Gojyo and Goku together is serious, i mean, serious stuff. especially how you have it written. and it's good. funny how the "only once" things (like oneshot pwp's) can run away with themselves. i like the introduction of Hakkai. his thoughts on G/G together are ... promising. And his summation of Sanzo - that Sanzo sees Goku as something stable in his life and gives him a comfort zone - very nice.
looking forward to seeing where this takes you. thanks for writing and posting!
oh DEAR!
oh. my. dear.
This was great. a little more of the cuff humor than the last. very weird how the quirky humor is working with such a serious subject. i mean Sanzo finding Gojyo and Goku together is serious, i mean, serious stuff. especially how you have it written. and it's good. funny how the "only once" things (like oneshot pwp's) can run away with themselves. i like the introduction of Hakkai. his thoughts on G/G together are ... promising. And his summation of Sanzo - that Sanzo sees Goku as something stable in his life and gives him a comfort zone - very nice.
looking forward to seeing where this takes you. thanks for writing and posting!
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That gave me a good laugh. Gojyo! Have you no shame!?
I’m glad that you’re not sticking with the normal most typical pairings within the Saiyuki fandom (not that they aren’t a good read) but it is refreshing to see something new and new this is. Because it is so uncharacteristic of them to be together in the first place, it makes for a great story and drama when you do something like this.
It was really nice in how you perceived Sanzo's and Goku's relationship and it somehow puts the story into a much more believable state -not that it wasn't believable t begin with.
And it was great to see that Hakkai pulled out of the Sanzo position before he really did become cynical enough to believe that it was "emotional blackmail" -nice see that there's someone whom is level headed.
Can't wait for your next update!
~Fall
I’m glad that you’re not sticking with the normal most typical pairings within the Saiyuki fandom (not that they aren’t a good read) but it is refreshing to see something new and new this is. Because it is so uncharacteristic of them to be together in the first place, it makes for a great story and drama when you do something like this.
It was really nice in how you perceived Sanzo's and Goku's relationship and it somehow puts the story into a much more believable state -not that it wasn't believable t begin with.
And it was great to see that Hakkai pulled out of the Sanzo position before he really did become cynical enough to believe that it was "emotional blackmail" -nice see that there's someone whom is level headed.
Can't wait for your next update!
~Fall
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol. will you be updating again? im enjoying this story.
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved the first chapter, which I thought was a one-shot, but the continuation was brilliant! The demons were funny and every one was in character, and the drama! The drama is just awesome! Please, continue!
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this isn't even an OTP for me, and this still has to be one of my favourite Saiyuki fics ever written. Very in character, and the circumstances behind Gojyo and Goku's relationship are absolutely perfect. Really, I don't think there's anything negative I can say about this story. Your writing style is fantastic, your delivery is flawless, your sense of timing is impeccable. Honestly, excellent work! <3
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fucking hot.
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, this I liked. A lot. Really. . .