rate_review Reviews

I've just got to say how much I love this!!

Sometimes AUs can be hard to write, but you've got them so perfectly in character that it completely works! The setting seems to fitting too, with their jobs and relationships and stuff. I love it!

Also, Ace is so cheeky, it's adorable. And Luffy's just precious! As well as Smoker (who I wasn't the biggest fan of before I took a look at your portrayal of him XD).

Grr...I hope Nami doesn't get too much more of a chance to screw Sanji over...perhaps Zoro can run in and save the day, all heroic like, and sweep Sanji off his feet, kicking and screaming and...I'm rambling...

Anyway! Thanks for posting! I'm on the look out for the next part!

xxx

your son. hehe poor smoker. I've reviewed before so you know I think your writings awsome but I feel like I should review every now and again. thanks for keeping the updates pretty often. I'll be eagerly awaiting the rest.

oh jeez. you are just stringin' me along. the sex scene was amazing, and the situation with the hotel isn't something i've seen done before. but i was wondering... where's luffy? not going to be mentioned?

anyway, sexy, sexy, and more sexy. your descriptiveness is divine. :)

I love this story. Can't wait until the update. Thank you.

oooh nice. are we gonna get more? should be a bit of an interesting morning after.

I can't wait to see what is going to happen in the morning!!! This is great, thank You!

I love the 3rd chapter!! Great work! When will be another one ready?? :D

Gah! X( I wanna read more!!! Update soon please!!

This is great! upload the next chapter please! I can't wait to read it!!