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Really enjoyable work. Seras exhibits a personality here that we don't often get from fanfiction. It's refreshing to see her be a bit of a spitfire once in awhile rather than just silly, bumbling and easily dominated.

I love your story. I love the way you expressed Alucard's and Seras' emotions and the tension that built up between them. Well done. =)

I read this a whiiiiiiiile ago so I'm sorry it's taken me a while to review. This is great! It's nice to see the point of view of both Seras and Alucard as concerning her changing. It's really cool!

yay

It almost seems like the recipe for making Alucard and Serras NOT OOC is to have Alucard drive her nuts in subtle, M rated, sometimes violent ways to show he's interested, and to lower the percentage rate of angst on Serras. Some should be mixed in but she doesn't show it so often, I mean.

But anyway, I did like this fic, not bad. Is it over? The way ch.3 ended it seems like you've gotten where you were going.

this fic is really sweet even if they are ooc lol, u shud update

Mmmm I loves it! It's perhaps a little OOC, but not enough to detract from the story or anything. Kudos!

You're right about how most people, sometimes, go out of character at points. But, there are methods and means to 'get things out in the open' without going even a bit OOC, and those fics that find those sneaky loopholes are the ones that leave me begging for more.

I could just cut it short and say in my humble opinion, OOC'ness don't mix with fics that win.

Another wonderful chapter. The tension between Alucard and Seras is so well built up. Poor Seras, she thinks Alucard was talking of another British female vampire when he's talking about her! I love this story! And personally, I don't see Alucard and Integra out of character at all. While Alucard is rather psychotic in battle and can be very sarcastic and selfish, that's not all there is to Alucard. I see him as a very complex character with a whole range of emotions that most of the time he keeps very well hidden. Integra can be the same way. Most of the time she's that stone cold, all buisness seek and destroy person, but she is a woman, and even she can have a soft side.
I am enjoying this very much and I hope you will continued further. I can't wait to see how the next chapter will unfold.
Please keep up the excellent work.
Silverrose

WOW .... great first chapter i really want to see what Alucard does next and how Seras reacts to it. Hope she just doesnt give wouldnt be any fun at all. :)