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by chiatralfaz

person Alicia Spinet
schedule February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering... why did you stop whit the fic? Why didn't you continued whit it? I would have love to know what would happen now that Wolfie awoken! Please, can you tell me. Do you even want to continue????????
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow great but terribly depressing song at the same time. r u gonna ifinish it any time soon?
person alicem
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you can get another chapter. I can't wait till the next one comes out.

Alice
person Wendera
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Smut chapter FTW! XD

Truthfully, as much of a rabid, yaoi fangirl as I am, something about Yozak/Conrad weirds me out a bit. I'm not quite sure what it is about the two of them, but I usually avoid this pairing like the plague XD I had actually skipped over the whole scene until I saw your author's note at the end and was like, "Hmmm, better read it then!". And, I think it was rather well done~ You avoided all the major pitfalls like using 'colorful' names for anatomy and you made the scene nicely detailed without droning on. I give it two thumbs up ^.^ I'm still squicky about the pairing though ^.^;;;;; This pairing and Gwendal/Gunter.... But at least I have a reason why I don't like Gwendal/Gunter which is basically my brain rejecting the thought of Gunter being in any kind of serious relationship at all XDDD

Anyway, great job!! Waiting for more~~~~~~

...... Crying Conrad FTW!!!!
person alicem
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Ch 20

This Cahpter was great at showing how much Conrad really loves his brother even more thatn his feelings for Yuuri. The interaction with him and Yozak was precious.

I can't wait to see what Wolfram says now that he has woken up after Yuuri collapsed at Greta's funeral. At least Wolfram was able to say goodbye in his dreams. Maby that will help Yuuri also deal with their loss.

Can't wait for the next update.

alice
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your alive!!!!!!! and updated...and...not eaten by zombies!!! Yess! one less infected to deal with!

*shakes the ever liveing crud out of you* Never...EVER...wish for zombies! Greta's out there!! shes leading a horrid zombie ban! we are all doooomed!! no one can excape her cutesy undead-ness! and your wishing for it! SHAME!

and now Yuri is bleeding! now we are going to have Vampires! great just great!
person Wendera
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update!! A short and VERY SAD update, but YAY! It was like some cosmic intervention or something... I hadn't been on the site in a few weeks and all of a sudden I had the urge to browse today XD

That description about his fingernails cracking made me cringe x.x** Eeeeee! I guess it didn't help that I had accidentally shoved a staple up my fingernail earlier today so I had a recent pain to link to the mental image XDDD Anyway, waiting faithfully for the next Chappy!!

~had to redo this review because I put in a symbol that deleted half the review ^.^;;;;
person Chocho
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. I have never been so depressed and on the verge of tears in my entire life while reading. Talk about angst. I hope you have plans of continuing. I'll just have to make sure to have my box of kleenex nearby.
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*pokes you hard* Duuuude...been ...waiting...and....waiting...... zombie got you hold up somewhere huh? reamber! use soap to ward them off! ...oh wait... thats for hippies.... crap mixed them up again....
person alicem
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 18

I hope that everything is fine with you. I have been waiting patiently for the next chapter for almost 2 wks.

Is Wolfram going to wake up soon and find Yuuri withhim. I hope so and with their combined love it should help them both with their grief over the loss of Greta.

Update soon, onegai!

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