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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I just read it all at once. I cried, poor Greta and wolfram. Please update.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! update!! Loves and dead puppys for everyone!Poor Yuri.... *smacks* STOP TRYING TO KILL WOLF YOU CRAZY MAN BOY! eveything went to hell in a hand basket ... witch btw is the best way to give out hell you know... well maybe you can malprg someone and get a new kid XD .... hey you! update faster man.... talk of Ghostys and war is all lovely and all but i want to see Yuri the barbarian or the impaler... or somthing... WAR! and ....
...*pokes greta ghosty* Joo.... joo no zombie.... *poke poke* why joo no zombie!?
*greta turns into zombie* RAWR! *give out the most pussy puss puss scream the world has ever known*
...*pokes greta ghosty* Joo.... joo no zombie.... *poke poke* why joo no zombie!?
*greta turns into zombie* RAWR! *give out the most pussy puss puss scream the world has ever known*
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy heck! You updated twice!? ^_____^ that makes me happy!! The newest chapter was more sad than angsty though. Not too good with the sad thing, lol. As soon as I saw Greta's name I went "Uhoh". Some of the things she said were a little hard to imagine coming from her mouth, but then again, you're writing a side of her that they didn't show in the anime so I'll attribute it to that.
Anyway, I'll be waiting for the next chapter ^.^
P.S. I loved your description of Wolfram's field. I lost myself in my imagination while I was reading it like I was laying down in the field myself~
Anyway, I'll be waiting for the next chapter ^.^
P.S. I loved your description of Wolfram's field. I lost myself in my imagination while I was reading it like I was laying down in the field myself~
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just reread my review and I'd like to say that when I said "Not too good with the sad thing" I meant I wasn't good with dealing with it. You wrote it very well ^.^ Just clearing confusion!
(I would also like to say that Luna's review before mine is the greatest review ever XD)
(I would also like to say that Luna's review before mine is the greatest review ever XD)
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Update. Update!
Now that Wolfram was able to see Greta and say goodbye maby he will wake up in the next chapter and talk with Yuuri.
If all the other countries can see that Yuuri's daughter was killed and Wolfram almost died maby it would calm them down. Everyone can understand that grieving parents are capable of doing excessive actions to protect family and Yuuri's behavior was not excessive, and it took care of the plot against all of them wihtout endangering those not involved.
At least I hope so!
Can't wait for the next update.
Now that Wolfram was able to see Greta and say goodbye maby he will wake up in the next chapter and talk with Yuuri.
If all the other countries can see that Yuuri's daughter was killed and Wolfram almost died maby it would calm them down. Everyone can understand that grieving parents are capable of doing excessive actions to protect family and Yuuri's behavior was not excessive, and it took care of the plot against all of them wihtout endangering those not involved.
At least I hope so!
Can't wait for the next update.
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*dances around in triangles around the room* YA my name was droped again , tee hee la lala! i don;t know how to put up the heart icons....
*Stops in mid step* NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO! BAD YURI! GOD! Its getting worse and worse! AUGG!! poor Yuri!! ahhh! next the zombies will come and eat everyone! *twichs* .... ZOMBIES!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOO!
*dose the twich dance just for you*
*Stops in mid step* NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO! BAD YURI! GOD! Its getting worse and worse! AUGG!! poor Yuri!! ahhh! next the zombies will come and eat everyone! *twichs* .... ZOMBIES!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOO!
*dose the twich dance just for you*
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
1st off your question- yes funeral for Greta but not big one.
2nd-i hope that i did not offend you but if i did then i am sorry
3rd-my tow ideas that i would like to see if you want to put in the story-Wolfram and Yurri have a mind link through the power yuri f
ed him, Yuri convinces Wolfram to wake up if you are not there yet, if you are then maybe convince him to do something to take their minds of their grief, somethng romantic, but not monkey sex which i prefer calling smex but everyone has different ways of refering to the lemons.
4th-updating more than one time a week,- all i ask is that you try lkie you said.
5th-this chapie was good but why did it hurt wolfram instead of heal
6th-How about yuri taking a ride by himeself near water
7th-last-Would you consider Yuri having a contract with all four elelments-earth, air, fire,and water, i remember reading a fic that had that but now i cant find it. I dont know how you will react to that so i am putting it last, but it would be great please let me know if you think it bad idea
great story so far.
2nd-i hope that i did not offend you but if i did then i am sorry
3rd-my tow ideas that i would like to see if you want to put in the story-Wolfram and Yurri have a mind link through the power yuri f
ed him, Yuri convinces Wolfram to wake up if you are not there yet, if you are then maybe convince him to do something to take their minds of their grief, somethng romantic, but not monkey sex which i prefer calling smex but everyone has different ways of refering to the lemons.
4th-updating more than one time a week,- all i ask is that you try lkie you said.
5th-this chapie was good but why did it hurt wolfram instead of heal
6th-How about yuri taking a ride by himeself near water
7th-last-Would you consider Yuri having a contract with all four elelments-earth, air, fire,and water, i remember reading a fic that had that but now i cant find it. I dont know how you will react to that so i am putting it last, but it would be great please let me know if you think it bad idea
great story so far.
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 17
I think that there shoudl be some of the funeral for continuity of the story. Will Wolfram be well enough to attend if you have the funeral. IF it's left out I would miss both Yuuri's and Wolfram's way to say goodbye to her.
Will Yuuri's family be going as well?
Wanyways happy to see the next chapter, out earlier this week.
I think that there shoudl be some of the funeral for continuity of the story. Will Wolfram be well enough to attend if you have the funeral. IF it's left out I would miss both Yuuri's and Wolfram's way to say goodbye to her.
Will Yuuri's family be going as well?
Wanyways happy to see the next chapter, out earlier this week.
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! ANGST!! ..... Sorry ^.^ You update really fast o.o That's a good thing, though. Even more amazing is that you're churning out some good stuff!! ::patiently waits for the awesome angst that is coming in the next chapter::
On an observational note, this is the first fic I've read that has killed off Greta. Lots of other fic writers like to pretend she doesn't exist or just blatantly don't include her at all, but you're the first writer I've come across that has actually off'd her. Just a little fun fact ^.^
On an observational note, this is the first fic I've read that has killed off Greta. Lots of other fic writers like to pretend she doesn't exist or just blatantly don't include her at all, but you're the first writer I've come across that has actually off'd her. Just a little fun fact ^.^
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit i dont like the fact that greta is dead. THough i have to wonder if Wolfram can get pregant in this fic i hope so. It is getting better though i wish you could update at least every other day instead of everyday. One more thing why do you call it monkey sex? Though i will admit to being partial to it in a story like this. I love lemons, freaky cant believe i wrote that. btw thanks for answering my questions and i look foward to the next chapters. you will eloberate on why they had to stay on earth and what loose ends yuri had to tie up wont you ?