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by chiatralfaz

person monrque
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you really like to push my buttons.
(Smiles and Laughs Evilly) I'm coming for you
person alicem
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

No Greta can't be dead. And now Wolfram is dying? Now the Yuuri is awake I think he will go Maou and save Wolfram, since if he looses his other loved one I don't think he will make it. I hope that Murata can bring over Yuuri's parents to help him deal with the lose of Greta, God knows it won't work if he also looses Wolfram. THen I would fear for his sanity.

Anyways woke up early and checked the site, glad of it sinceI was able to read the next chapter.

person alicem
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch 16

The more I think of this the more I'm concerned and fear for Yuuri's sanity if Wolfram also dies.

My only consilation is that the info on the story states that it will be a Yuram story eventually. Hope that you can get out the next chapter quickly!!!!!!!!!!!!

schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ebil...ebil ...ebil leaving us with a cliff hanger. ~waits~ ok hurry and up date please. I want to read more....~demands~ being I have been lost in the Inuyasha, Naruto and Bleach stories it is good to come back and find you updated this one thanks. Your doing a great job.
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sits and ponders the meaning of " *wink*wink*nudge*nudge*" *..........*twichs when it dawns on her*............ OMG ZOMBIES!ZOMBIES ZOMBIES ZOMBIES!ZOMBIESZOMBIESzombiesZOmBIES! Flesh eating undead!

wow you updated fast. aw sadness ...madness? but yeah update fast man! hurry hurry hurry! and... CPR!! Hurry! no EMO Yuri...

tee hee i feel special! tee hee i was mention hee hee ZOMBIES! *twich*
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just read this for the hell of it...........and even tho it was slow in the 1st few chapters i still wanted to read more...OMG YOU KILLED GRETA! ... crap! next chapter! i want to see if she stays dead...you can never trust someone to stay dead you know..........greta zombie..... *shakes head*
person Wendera
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Yuuri insta-killed everyone involved. Bet they didn't see THAT one coming!!!! ..... was that too mean?? XD

Anyway, sounds like Yuuri's going to have one hell of a political mess to deal with since the other people involved probably got their targets. And on top of all that, his fiancee's messed up and his daughter's dead ;-;

..... I hereby dub you the Queen of Angst (in a good way ^.^ )
person liloca
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I think your characters are very belivable and 3 dimensional. I can´t wait for the update.
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story i just started reading it but i am a little confuesed as to why greta dies or will she live. I have so many questions like
Will yuuri and Wolfram find love during the crisis
Will Greta Live?
Will Yuuri remember what he did to the bad guys
who exactly are the bad guys
And the flashes into the criminals mind when yuuri found out what they were planning
so many questions please dont keep us in suspense

person alicem
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I guess there is a positive to getting up a 5AM on Sunday, cause I get to read the ch 15 so early.

God, Yuuri killed all thost plotting against them at one time, scary power. I bet that action will make everyone think twice about trying to attack him again. With the attack he didn't even get to great Wolfram before all hell broke loose.

IS Greta alive and will Wolfram live??

Please update soon cause the suspense is killing me.

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