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for Dawn

by chiatralfaz

person Gabby18
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I reviewed before, but I can't wait for your next chapter. I am really enjoying this fic. gabby
person Wendera
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I need the next chapter!!!! XD This is an awesome story so far!!! Keep it up~~
person alicem
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What is happening now? Who is injured and what is going on??????? I'm so glad that Yuuri is back and Wolfram and Greta were there at the time of his arrival. Now is the time for the groveling


Please update Soon!

Happy Martin Luther King Day mina.

schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are evil; I want the next chapter now!!! *throws a tempter tantrum* Oh well, I guess I have to wait. Update soon and there better be some smut later on to make up for the cliffhanger. Actually, you don't need a reason to include the smut.
person monrque
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
why did you have to do it. i just knew this was going to
be an angst riddle story. will they ever get a break.
my heart cried for wolf. i just want my cute blond to be
happy. I enjoy this story very much.

(You do know that towns people will hunt you down for that ending)
person alicem
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God the Great Demon Bordello! That's hysterical. Now that Yuuri has finially acknowledged some of he feelings can he find a way back home and ask those who love him most to forgive him his stupidity. That will take a long and hard time Ithink.

Great update
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. what is going on with Yuuri dreaming about Wolfram and what the the cry of his fiance's name wake him so suddenly. Please ocnintue!!
person alicem
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I wonder when Yuuri will figure out how to get back to Shim MAkoka and ho whe will begin to make up his stupid actions with all of his family and friends there. Ithink it will take alot to get back into the good graces of Wolfram and h ewillfind that Greta is not as innocent, clueless, and little as he believes.

Stupid Yuuri.
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor, clueless Yuri; he didn't realize his kingdom was left without a ruler. Sometimes, he's too slow for his own good (even if it adds to his cuteness ^-^). Also, I love how you added the secret plan to the story; it keeps things interesting and it guarantees more chapters. Yay.

Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter and I hope you update soon; I need something to read while I'm procrastinating and not doing my homework.
person alicem
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

I hope that everyone has a Happy New Year.

Great update. I loved it when Yuuri was so pissed that he hit Murata, he should have decked him sooner, in mu opinion. Now that Yuuri thinks he can go back how long will it take for him to leave and what will the situation be in Shin Makoto when he arrives.

He should immediately take off to find Wolfram, and damm the rest of the world till he finds him and Greta. You have to priortize your family first.

alice

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