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by chiatralfaz

person alicem
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MERRY CHRISTMAS!

Thanks for the update. Ihope that Yuuri finds a way back soon, but know he will have to go to Wolfram and Greta since they have left Convanent Castle. Maybe that won't be such a horrible thing since his going to them would signify his change immediatley to them?

Can't wait for the next update, since I am home all week on vacation.
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the story and where you are taking seems interesting
person alicem
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God no ones happy neither Yuuri or Wolfram. Somehow they have to get back together.

Gret update
person keiko259
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi... great writing here. how you established greta's and wolfram's relationship is good, as well as in describing everybody's reaction to yuuri's leaving Shin Makoku. Likewise, you tied the political implications of Yuuri's absence in the country pretty well... Some of the writers somehow fail to describe those things in their fics. But I'm really not quite sure where the story will go... haven't seen the major plot twist yet and i think that after having written so many chapter already, it would be better for the readers to have a glimpse of it. I guess that's why it also took me this long to review this fic. Hope for an update soon!
person alicem
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was happy when I saw the update this AM. Hope to read more about Yuuir the idiot. It would be nice if he showed up at the Peace Conference and apoligized to everyone and privately with Wolfram and Greta, but it's going to take alot of groveling now to get back in their good graces.

Have you heard that there will be a 3rd season of KKM starting in 4/08. Can't wait to see if they have Yuuri be less of an idiot in his relationship with Wolfram.
person alicem
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. The anime shows Yuuri comming back and everything is great. No one is allowed to feel betrayed or abandoned by his leaving them.

This shows me how it could have been. I was happy the Wolfram stood up and supported Greta whose Father just left her without even saying goodbye. Yuuri is just so stupid!!!!!!

Anyways I am looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good Chapter...made me cry...meanie...Lol anyway I hope you keep this going I would love to read more or at least a little happier. I am going to bet these were hard chapters to write and think about. Good job.
person alicem
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How sad. Now that Yuuri has left it gives us perspective on how both Greta and Wolfram feel and how they felt they could go on after basically being abandoned. The anime showed how everything went back to normal with Yuuri comming back, but life isn't like this and sometimes feelings don't return after you are abandoned.

Anyways, I am really enjoying the story and look forward to new chapters.
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written! I liked this chpter so far. I can empathize with Wolfram's pain, since it was very clearly and eloquently described. You have a way with words that not many has. Keep it up! I do hope you update soon, as I am looking forward to how you're plot is going to pan out. :)

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