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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It's short, sweet, and to-the-point, and also well written. Yay ^^
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd have to agree with the first two reviewers, the no prep really made me wince.
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really nice, i like it. The ending was good enough.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice! it was a good story, but i have to tell you from a reader's perspective the transition from yelling to kissing to sex happened too quickly. watanuki should have put up more of a fight when doumeki kissed him. or at least they should have argued a little bit more after the kiss. things just seemed to take too fast of a 180.
either way, however, it was a good fic and i'm glad i read it.
either way, however, it was a good fic and i'm glad i read it.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaaww how cute! i love it! the romance and the hot stuff and a bit of anger in the same chapter. good job!
see you
see you
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like that it was really good, yes you kept them very in chara. Thank-you for taking the time to post this for us to enjoy.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Wish there was a bit more to it. But great for a PWP.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic. Short, sweet and enjoyable.
My only criticism would be Doumeki taking Watanuki without *any* preparation at all... ouch!
Otherwise, great stuff. I loved Watanuki being his usual bratty/screechy self there at the end.
My only criticism would be Doumeki taking Watanuki without *any* preparation at all... ouch!
Otherwise, great stuff. I loved Watanuki being his usual bratty/screechy self there at the end.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the two reviewers above. (must have more prep or it will really hurt)
Nice start! I love this couple and would love to read good fic about them. Surround this piece you just wrote with more plot and you would have a great fic. Seriously... ya did really good, keep going! ^_^
Nice start! I love this couple and would love to read good fic about them. Surround this piece you just wrote with more plot and you would have a great fic. Seriously... ya did really good, keep going! ^_^