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for My Son Has Lost His Mind

by YamiBakura

person mino
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao, that was a wicked story,
I could totaly picture Raito/light
sitting like that and doing those things
anyway keep up the good work
*throws you pocky*
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was so cute! I especially loved the last two paragraphs, lol. Great job!
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was awesome. It's so neat to see Raito experimenting on L's habits, I was chuckling the whole time. It would be really neat to see L's reaction to Raito's experiments and how embarassed Raito might be when his seclusion is over.
person Tea
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, that was so funny. I would love to see L's reaction to the change in Raito after he comes back from Yagami-san's panicky phone call. That was so funny, it's great.
person DakotaRei
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, that made me giggle alot. I think you should write more as I agree with the first reviewer and would like to see L's reaction to this new Light.
person Serendipity
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XDD I LOVED that! The images that came into my mind made me giggle; I think that if Raito started acting like L it would be unbelievably adorable~! :3 I was kind of disappointed it ended there; I wanted to see how L reacted to that. XDDD But, alas, I suppose it was really your decision in the end.
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! that was certainly a very amusing piece of fiction. I wonder what L's reaction would be if he reviewed the videos or got to see Light like that in person...
person Duomi
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*still laughing* The end bit-- with Souichiro-- I cracked up. This was very fun, I can just picture L blankly looking at the Raito version of himself. Very cute.
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was completely cute! I liked it a lot. I've always wanted to see Light crouched like L too, so I really enjoyed it and chuckled many times.
person waterbooklover
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was the best! I could not stop laughing! Please, please, please write another chapter! Or a sequel!!

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