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Please tell me you are going to do some more because I can't wait to see what happens.I also can't wait and see what happens at the dinner Party.

Kaaaaaatttt, where's the rest of this? I know Bleach is eating your brain but c'mon.

Great chapter (7), Katami-san! We've never seen Omi screw up before vis a vis hacking. How humiliating to be brought down by such a low tech thing as VHS!! I hope he found out something useful for his trouble. I'm glad Aya and Yohji are back on good terms and the couch is in the past. I hope they have a little fun at the party before the Blacks and the Whites recognise each other. Of course Aya can do mission mode in heels! I'm enjoying your sense of the absurd very much, and can't wait for the two red-headed housewives to meet. Gods help them if they're wearing the same dress!!

LOL OMG! I love it. Great job.

aya a.....housewife. A knife throwing housewife, but still, a dress wearing shoe loving 50'like stepford housewife.....what's even scarier? Is you actually make enjoyable to read...or maybe I've just become corrupted beyond all hope :0

Keep up the good work!

Finally!! Yohji gets a clue, thanks to the other men at the office and Mary Crane. Yes, women are onto something with this shoe thing, and an Aya wearing only heels is worth any price. So, Yohji gets laid and hopefully back in the bedroom, Aya has a new wardrobe and the party is looming closer and closer. I'm dying to learn who is the first to discover the other team's presence. I still see Aya and 'Sasha' getting together to compare spouse notes, though, whether the target gets killed or not. Excellent work, Katami, and beyond funny. Your tongue must be permanently stuck to your cheek! Love it!

Yes, I am mildly worried about Aya's sudden shoe fetish but it's hardly surprising since he's always liked sharp and pointy things. Excellent work as always. Whipped Ken and terrified Omi are bonuses in the mix.

chapter one is hysterical. Looking forward to number two!

*sporfles* oh, Mrs. Crane, you don't know what you've done...

"I said, wash up." zomg...