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oh geez, Aya is creeping me out!

Aya shoe-shopping? That's just terrifying.

Kritiker should consider having all its assassins take up cross-dressing: Aya has turned positively lethal. Why even throw knives when you could kill a man with footwear? I liked the understated and tongue in cheek humour you use. Your imagination is wicked! Excellent writing, very descriptive. I can see all the little vignettes in my mind's eye. This chapter had so much information in it to set up future action. Yohji, take a clue. Read up on shoe fetishes and boot licking. The couch is no place for a man with a wife like Aya to be!

ROTFLMAO!!!

Oh my~ It soo funny XD

ROTFLMAO!!!! That's all that needs to be said.

Well done, Katami-san! I am terrified of, by and for Aya-"kun". Those knives are going to come in handy when he meets the Blacks, particularly the knife loving one. I think your characterisation of Aya is spot on, it just seems right for him to find a twisted kind of rapport with under-appreciated housewives. They do hold all the power, you know. Somehow I see a sisterly comraderie between the other red-headed domestic goddess and Aya. They may even trade dresses and recipes. Who am I kidding? Yohji would do well to hug the couch. Smashing humour and dialogue!

Aya has never been quite so scary before. ^^;

Oh gosh, it's hillarious! I love it :D Keep up the good work!

This story is just too much fun. I've been dying for updates. Please keep it coming.