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you could have ended your story on either of the two, but i am happy that you continued ^__^

hahah petting ears .. random yes but meh
great chapter ^__^

YAY an update...and that was so HOT...I love the section of you scratching and stroking his ears...so amazingly hot

hahah poor Soubi, not understanding what he was getting himself into
I loved the part when Soubi realized that his dear little Ritsuka was naked! That was priceless

wow, one taste of power and you are addicted hahah
Great chapter!! ^__^

I am stunned by Soubi's ability to control himself--so far. Your descriptions of the ear-stroking are marvelous, highly charged and pregnant with potential. But if Ritsuka loses his ears to Soubi, no more ear-stroking. Very well written and paced. I hope this story doesn't end soon, I am really enjoying it!

i love your descriptions in this, especially from ritsuka's point of view! his thoughts and reactions to the ear rubbing (again!) were most titillating. i also love the descrip about his body anticipating something his mind still doesn't quite understand. yes, ritsuka, you can lose control ^_~

O.O Wow, I usually avoid reading Loveless fiction because most everything I've read is either horribly written or completely mutilates my favorite story and characters. But oh my God. Now I might just not read any Loveless fics because I'm sure none of them will be as good as this (although I see another Loveless fic in your profile...). It's beautifully written and I was practically on the edge of my seat the whole time lol. I am HIGHLY anticipating the next chapter!

Now excuse my while I turn into a squeally fan-girl and obsess over Soubi and Ritsuka...

I followed the link from your profile to this second 'Loveless' story. I'm happy to see the same sensitivity here as in the first. It helps that Ritsuka is 14 here, but the tender and careful way Soubi is leading him into awareness of sexuality is promising for a close and sustainable relationship. Hard as it is, he is letting Ritsuka lead the way and have the power to say no even as he is saying yes. Wonderfully descriptive and insightful, this is developing into much more than just a Fighter wooing his Sacrifice. There is exploration and enlightenment, commitment and respect. Again, excellent writing and imaginative plot.

Love it love it love it!!! Great jod, I adore loveless and this it great. Update soon!!!!