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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ho-Holy shit...I don't think there could possibly BE a better way to word your story...GAH--it's so hot it's tearing me apart! ...please keep going!
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow--Chapter 1 was amazing! Ritsuka confessing was so adorable, and Soubi's mix of protectiveness and desire so hot!
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the switching between the two points of view--oh, yeah, Ritsuka tie up Soubi and spank him . . .
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3--perfect!! Wonderful!! The dawn knowledge of Ritsuka's power--oh wonderful!
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooooh, tail and cat ear fondling. yummy. more. NOW! please?? =^.^=
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
once again, it is SO mean of you to end that there! sooooo good. you MUST update soon!
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg this is so very very hot. The punctuation and grammar are near-perfect, also, which makes the whole reading-experience much smootehr and more enjoyable. It is well written in many respects, effective imagery being one of the main ones (ie mot using the same done to death sex cliches in all their shapes and forms, such as wordchoice and sequence of events). Thank you and good luck with the next chapter! xx
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! You cant stop yet! I just love loveless! And I have to know what
happens to Ritsuka's ears! *giggles evily*
happens to Ritsuka's ears! *giggles evily*
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for you to update!!!!!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good...Yes...more please...pretty please. This has started out awesome. Thanks!