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i swear to god, you have got to update soon! that was so unfair to end that there! gah. i don't even know what else to say. really good writing! lol. keep it up!

UWAH!!!

HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!~~
im dying to see the nxt part. ><

damn... i mean, DAMN, i love your descriptions. artfully sensual and so very ritsuka and soubi. great job on the characterizations, in action, interaction, and dialogue! the whole setup is wonderful and a fun approach as well, and i hope you continue soon because i can't wait to read more!!

Not to tear into this, but so far it's looking like it has some serious characterization problems. I really doubt that Ritsuka would just be willing to be a nude model-- even if he wanted lots of naked-fun-sex with Soubi, he's not the sort to just go "Here I am, naked. Please, ravish me!" or anything like that.


Buuuuut if it ends up with Ritsuka spanking Soubi because he's a dirty perv, I could forgive. But if it's the other way around, I think you might need to take a second (or third. Or fourth.) look at the manga.

Uhh, nice!
I hope you are going to provide us with a real "end of ears and tail" moment!
I know Ritsuka's age could be a controversial subject, but in my country, sex is OK from the age of 15, so it could be allright. Maybe they could celebrate his birthday?
Thanks so much for sharing!

That was breathtaking! Excellent pacing, very descriptive and touching. Their characterisations were spot on and your writing style was as tentative as the subject matter. Excellent job! Will it continue? I hope so!