rate_review Reviews

I could see it in my head: Tohru and the boys getting so worked up, they keep screwing in their sleep. Was particularly cool to imagine Kyo and Yuki trying boysex with each other. Mm-mm.

splendid

Bleh...deleted in on accident. Anyway, the hesitant relationship between Yuki and Kyo was well played. Needs a bit more editing and descriptions in the middle. The school scene seemed a little unnecessary. I was confused on who Tohma was. I guess it's supposed to be Kyo, but his last name is Souma. I just checked my raw version to make sure...anyway. Is it a normal thing to refer to Kyo as such?

It was.. interesting.