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seriously i love thisss. your writing is amazing. i know i'm probably super late but keep it up. 

seriously i love thisss. your writing is amazing. i know i'm probably super late but keep it up. 

Personally, I think you are doing a great job an sincerely hope that you continue with this story. I am dying to know what Yuki will think of Natasha carrying Toruh's spirit.

I thank you for the new review that was given, but you said that there were 'issues' with my grammar. I would be more then happy to correct them if you would be so kind as to inform me of what grammar mistakes I have done. I have written 12 different stories and I 'thought' for the most part one of the cleanest when it came to grammar. But all of us can make mistakes, so since I have my contact email in my profile I would enjoy thoroughly hearing from you so that I may make those necessary changes.


And yes my dearest friends I really am working on the next chapter....slowly...painfully.

I got Striptease to help me form a visual as to what I have in mind for Rin's little dance - song used is going to be Little Bird from Annie Lennox

This is great! You should totally continue this. A few minor mistakes but you're a good writer and the plot is a good one.

love the instincts. I dont think tasha should be ha'ri's mate. I dont know why.. it just strikes me wrong....

youre gonna break haru?? how sad... :(

:( Hatori... blech (sorry, i like ha'ri/kana)

im not sure how to take this? tash is 3 people? thats interesting.... and a primal Hatori... nice I kinda like that. so, whos the mystery mate?

Im so glad Yuki's talking... that makes me happy... it also makes me happy that yuki and ayame get along...