rate_review Reviews

I love, love, LOVE this story! You did an amazing job characterizing both Gojyo and Sanzo, but I especially found Gojyo interesting. You touched on something that not many other writers either understand or address... Gojyo's need for attention and acknowledgment from Sanzo. The "look what I did, love me" lines really stood out to me, but in a good way. You gave Gojyo a more understandable motive and train of thought by delving into his character like that. In any case, that story was wonderful, and I hope to see more from you sometime!

Great work! Funny, yet tender, too. I think you held the characterisations well, though they're almost becoming stereotypes by now. I think Gojyo is off for lube and handcuffs, so maybe we could see a followup story about their second time and what they are thinking and feeling in light of the major change in the way they see each other. Wonderful writing!