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by Moonchild10

person Kerstin
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really soft and loving. It's not laiden with desperation but a smaller, much more sensitive emotion.
I like this very much and it is rare that I read something so ... the word sweet does not discribe it because it sounds too cliché for that rare emotion.
I really would like to read more of your art.
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thats cute. like very cute, fluffy and has a very good deeper meaning as well. I love this story alot.
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh *_*
This one's pretty. And beautiful. And gentle and careful and vulnerable and soft and thousads of other things I can't name. This is a pretty blue twilight and a warm blanket you want to wrap yourself in and be lost forever.
It's just an amazing work of art :)
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's really very touching. It made me wonder about myself, haha. Nicely done.
person krad
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!That was so beutifuly writen.The feelings behide the words are so strong.I really enjoyed reading it.^-^
GREAT WORK!!
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully sweet. I loved every word of it.
person keebz
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Beautifully written. Great emotion! <3
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this vignette! There was tenderness, yet strength, and hope for further closeness. Great work! You seem to have a good feel for the hesitancy and timidity on both sides. Perfect length, too.

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