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Oh please oh please oh please continue! It's so good!

Does anybody "like" Cardinal Francesco di Medici?

There are a few minor grammar and spelling errors but nothing glaring enough to detract from the flow of the reading. The story itself is very good and I am impressed that you were able to convey some of the horror of torture without having to go into blatant detail (and that you didn't write a sex scene between the two men just to garner interest and possible reviews/ratings). It's nice to have a little something left to the imagination for a change.

I'm very much looking forward to the rest of this. Please don't take too long to update.

Very nice work...with your permission id like to use some of this story....just for gaming pruposes....ill kudoe you with what I use.

Woohoo! Go Seth! Gods I just love her. Poor muddled Abel. He just can't seem to shift the weight of the world off of his shoulders, can he. Yay! Updates are a good thing. Got any more? Soon?

*poke* Where's the rest of this? Yes, I know, I'm nagging.

Great story so far, I started reading the first chapter and I couldn't stop until the last one uploaded. Bravo, I'll be waiting forward to read more of this.

Ack! Sorry, sorry, sorry! Total senior moment. I really like where this is going. I knew that Francesco would be easy for Cain to manipulate. Poor Abel! Should be interesting to see how these events turn out.

This is a great story so far I can't wait to read more. Please keep it coming.

I'm FIRST. I think. Yay! so happy you've decided to post this. Love the lead in.