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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hurray! you updated. i really thought
nagi was going to send ken through the wall
when he started to talk. and who would have
thought schuldig could be so kind and
considerate. now that everyone has met
when will they be aloud to go out and
start their dsstruction of takatori and
essett?
nagi was going to send ken through the wall
when he started to talk. and who would have
thought schuldig could be so kind and
considerate. now that everyone has met
when will they be aloud to go out and
start their dsstruction of takatori and
essett?
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well written... might just finish reading it....well when you finish writing it that is....
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As much as I despise the word "chappie" as a disgustingly idiotic fangirlism and the whole porn without much plot genre, you've managed to create a halfway decent "what if" story. If you keep up with your characterizations and tone down the splooge, this has the potential to develop into something resembling a dime store epic.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so omi is a telekinetic also. i bet nagi was shocked to see
that. it would have been interesting to see omi and nagi
battle it out but that would have destroyed the shop. so,
is crawford going to separate them and have them in their
prespective group or all they going to remain one big group. and
if they pair off, who will be the one to name them to weiss since
that is what aya calls the kitten.
this story is great i can't wait until the next chapter. i hope
it's soon. i want to see if omi and nagi makes up. i hope so.
poor nagi is so jealous, i wonder if omi knows how the boy
feels and he didn't want to get serious with him because he
works for his father. i just love the way how you let nagi's
jealous of ken and the fact that he just plan hates him, slam
ken against the wall from his nasty remark when he called
them freaks.
that. it would have been interesting to see omi and nagi
battle it out but that would have destroyed the shop. so,
is crawford going to separate them and have them in their
prespective group or all they going to remain one big group. and
if they pair off, who will be the one to name them to weiss since
that is what aya calls the kitten.
this story is great i can't wait until the next chapter. i hope
it's soon. i want to see if omi and nagi makes up. i hope so.
poor nagi is so jealous, i wonder if omi knows how the boy
feels and he didn't want to get serious with him because he
works for his father. i just love the way how you let nagi's
jealous of ken and the fact that he just plan hates him, slam
ken against the wall from his nasty remark when he called
them freaks.
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. How didn't I find this before?
This is a really interesting story, I hope that you'll decide to continue it?
This is a really interesting story, I hope that you'll decide to continue it?
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi, i just read all six chapters to your story and it was GREAT!. this
is an intriguing plotline you have. i was interesting in what omi was
going to tell nagi about his kidnaping. all the memebers of weiss is there
but they are not a team. so, poor little omi is the only one without a
power. awww, i'm sure nagi would prefer omi to have the power instead
of ken. why not think about changing your mind about omi. you should
let him have a power also. you could let him control water or earth or
the air.
anyway, again i love the story. i bit my bottom lip when i came to the
ending of chapter 6. oh well, guess i have no choice but to wait, huh.
update soon! okay!
is an intriguing plotline you have. i was interesting in what omi was
going to tell nagi about his kidnaping. all the memebers of weiss is there
but they are not a team. so, poor little omi is the only one without a
power. awww, i'm sure nagi would prefer omi to have the power instead
of ken. why not think about changing your mind about omi. you should
let him have a power also. you could let him control water or earth or
the air.
anyway, again i love the story. i bit my bottom lip when i came to the
ending of chapter 6. oh well, guess i have no choice but to wait, huh.
update soon! okay!