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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Extremely OOC, imho. And err... The lemon, in my opinion was a rather inelegantly written good idea.
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dunno... I kind of thought it was a little cheesy... it reminded me of some 'B' rated movie you'd see at a dollar theatre...
I think you can do alot better. I hope to read something new from you.
I think you can do alot better. I hope to read something new from you.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh~ OOC-ness! >_> Actually I thought at first it was SakuXEndrance from the summary. Then I was confused when I saw the Haseo/Endrance thing.
I have to say... its ...umm.... different. It's just too much into OOC territory for me. The idea was OOC to. I think that this kind of idea should be more of an 'accidental' peeking, and the tying up can still be worked in there. Dont give up though, keep trying! Id like to see something else from you, so I'll be looking for your next story!
I have to say... its ...umm.... different. It's just too much into OOC territory for me. The idea was OOC to. I think that this kind of idea should be more of an 'accidental' peeking, and the tying up can still be worked in there. Dont give up though, keep trying! Id like to see something else from you, so I'll be looking for your next story!