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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story & cant wait to see what happens next. Just work a little more on spelling & grammer & you'll be good ^_^
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, it's a good start, but will Shuichi be able to stay away from Eiri, and what will Hiro and Eiri end up doing?
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, all I can really say is practice makes perfect. Try investing in a spellcheck program, and work on your grammar.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm I like the idea for the story, I really do think Hiro and Shu make a nice couple. I think you should continue it but also try to get a beta because you have a bunch of spelling mistakes in this chapter.
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is so far so good, but you really need alot of help with your spelling. Keep going though. Good luck.