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Mmm, evilicious. I love the degradation together with the tenderness.

I liked and really enjoyed reading your story, it is both entertaining and hot. I hope you continue it. hmmm as a suggestion poor Venus is now the lowest slave, maybe she can serve Sailor Mars as an added humiliation in the eyes of the dark kingdom. I also think that Venus would begin to realize just how much her previous master Variscite was almost loving to her. Perhaps she can help bring him back. As to the other sailors scouts I am not sure if I want them to be able to rescue the others or to be captured as slave. The way you developed the Dark Kingdom implies that there isa whole city with normal people in it. Men, Women, and perhaps a few children. Where the scouts have this vision of the Dark Kingdom as an awfull dark place of evil monsters. So it would be entertaining for them to see the people of the city. The evil generals and Jaedite are not very good examples of a normal dark kingdom citizen.

I hope you write more chapters on this story and I think Venus is a natural slave while Sailor mars might be a submissive but she might be more than able to top venus and perhaps Ami. I alos like how you have Jaedite and Sailor Mars falling in love, will she be able to change him to be less evil, that is the question.

I was so happy to see another chapter in the story and I love how torn I am feeling. On the one hand I was Minako to be saved from her horrible life. But, I also feel bad for Rei who will probably lose her love when the rescue finally comes. I am very interested to see what you will do with Rei and Jaedite's relationship as the end draws near.

At least you're still writing, that's the main thing. And as long as Zaherite gets a nice, painful death, I'll be happy! I am a little worried about Rei, though, considering what was just stated in this chapter. But hopefully she'll get over it after the other girls kill him. Oh, well. Until chapter 15, then. Laters.

Nice!

I would love to see what happens next

I was hoping for a break up of the Dark Kingdom. Ah well, though at the beginning you used Variscite's name rather than Jedite's

This is good as far as it goes, but I hope you continue and make the other Senshi feel the joy of serving the Dark Kingdom.

I am glad to see you continued with the story and that Jadeite finally succeeded in his plans. I am very curious to see how the other Inner Moons will fit into the next portion of the chapter and I would love to see more interaction between Mars and Jadeite like there was in the first part of the story. Update soon!

Well... that's interesting. And silly Usagi has forgotten that the future can be changed. After all, wasn't that what the Black Moon Family had been trying to do? I, for one, am rooting for Jadeite to win. He deserves that win against the senshi after the work he's been doing.