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I've been waiting so long for another chapter in this story. I think Jadeite is slowly falling for Mars without realizing it. I'm sure Mamoru will give him a fight as will the remaining scouts but I'm not sure which side will win. I'd honestly like to see what would happen if he discovered that regardless of all his precausions Mars still managed to get pregnant by him. Would impending fatherhood change his thoughts about how he wants things to end? If the scouts do manage to win I think that, Stockholm Syndrome or not, she has started to develop a few feelings for him too. If she finds she is expecting and he actually seems to care about her and the child, possibly to the point of risking his life, she may beg the other scouts to let him live. It would be nice to see the two of them end up together no matter which side wins. It would also be nice to see him show that given the right circumstances he does care about something other than himself. Venus, hmmm ... I think she might be a bit less promiscuous after all that has happend and possibly be a bit more cautious. Sailor Moon ... hello Chibi Usagi ... they never said she wasn't expecting when she got married to Mamoru, just that they got married.

Wow, that sure changed things up. Not too sorry to see Adamite go, and Petzite and Selenite made their choices, better or worse. I almost pity Variscite, though, poor bastard. I pity Mina, more, though, now that she knows her powers were stripped and considering her current immediate future. Hopefully the rest of the girls are gonna come charging in before much longer and put a great big crimp on Jadeite's current plans. Well, until chapter 14, then. Laters.

Yeah! Makes you wonder who the Chibi-Usa's REAL Father is knowing what's going to happen in the next chapter. We both know what will happn.

I hope Variscite wins control of the Dark Kingdom, it would be an interesting rule with Venus finding ever craftier ways to resist her slavery without appearing to.

I am so happy to see another chapter of this story. I really loved how you captured how torn Rei is about wanting to be rescued, but also wanting to be with Jadeite. I really hope that you update soon and I would love to read more about Jadeite's POV concerning Rei and whether some of is feelings have changed as well, since that was hinted at in other chapters.

And boy are things heating up now. Jade's making his power play, and the Sailor Invasion is finally imminent, provided it doesn't backfire in their faces. And somehow, I agree with Jadeite, Adamite's not to be trusted, at all! As to the Makoto scenes, I dunno, I just don't see her as the type to pick up a guy at a bar for a one nighter. But, hey, whatever makes you happy. Either way, I look forward to the no doubt big action sequences of next time, hopefully in less than just under seven months! Until chapter 13, then. Laters!

Nice! Mars is under thumb (among other things) and soon more girls will fall. WHAHAHAHA!

omg! !!! fantastic! Was very sad when I saw the past update was last year...and then much to my delight there is a new update. Please don't take so long to write more. I am very eager to know what happens with Rei and Jed! And I think its a good twist haveing the outer sensuous show up just in the Nick of time!

Noiw I've head this story of yours up until chapter 11 too :) . I'll say, though this one appears to be less dark than your "Black Moon Triumphant", it's also good. Quite the interesting twists we are having here - the Youma are getting overconfindent because of Venus and Mars being in their current state, but this chapter around, Tenorite paid the price for being overconfindent. Futhermore, back in the Dark Kingdomn, both Jaedite and Variscite are finding out that they may not be as much in control as they wish that they were, which is an interesting twist, heh.

With Tenorite's death and the newly arrived reinforments, it appears that the Youmas "gotta catch'em all!"-campaign has come to a halt for now, so one cannot help but wonder if you'll let it stay at being only Venus and Mars that gets captured - at least, this way it would seem like the youma can't make much advance - politically speaking - since both major faction now has a "sailor pet" to use for political support? Well, in that case it's probably fine, even if some of us'll bemoan that we won't see any other sailors get captured and trained as well...

Keep up the good work!

OMFG, you're back!! To be honest, I was wondering if you were even still around it's been so long(a year and a half, actually).

Cool chapter, and nice to see the Outers finally make an explosive entrance to the action, though while I am happy that Ami escaped enslavement, I also find myself sad not to get to see what sort of "training" Tenorite had in mind. Oh, well, cie la vie. And now, of course, the Senshi have their ranks rebolstered. Nice touch, by the way, that Tenorite didn't recognize either of them. And I take it Chibi-Moon isn't actively fighting the Youma for some reason? Cause i note she was listed as going in with Moon and Mask to the one attack. Ah, well, no matter, things are finally moving forward, and hopefully and invasion/rescue mission is forthcoming. Until chapter 12, then. Laters.

(I may actually re-read chapters 1-10 just to remember what all's happened until since it has been so long...)