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February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see this updated. Do we have any chance for a Jupiter or Uranus chapter?
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February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you did not abandon this story. I was waiting for an update and I really can't wait to find out what happens to Mars and Jadeite. I feel bad for Ami, but I get the feeling that the good guys are turning the tables. Update soon.
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is there any chance of an update ... even a small one? Please don't let this fic die.
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is an excellent story, please update soon.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's been a long time since you last updated this story. When will you update again?
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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Will there be more Jaedite and Mars in future chapters I'd love to see if she is able to turn him around without his realizing it. It sounds like he might be starting to have some sort of feelings for her even if he is in denial himself and trying to fight anything he is starting to feel.
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story soon. I love how this fic is going and hope to see more of Jaedite and Mars soon.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic, how well you've set up the political tensions and everything is so descriptive and easy to read and visualize. I can't wait to see if Tenorite goes out and captures a scout, or if Jaedite or Variscite try to win more people over by capturing more. You've said the next chapter or so won't focus as much on Mars and Venus, so that will be really good to see what the others are up to and if Zaherite winds up with Sailor Moon as Jaedite promised. You've just laid such amazing groundwork I can't wait for more.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An ok chapter, it gives a better look at Venus and shows her as someone who doesn't just sit back. That said, as a practicing Muslim I'm a bit concerned at the portrayal of the character Amarite. I don't think that you intended to offend anyone, but in the world we live in it might be better not to go too deeply into religion. Beyond that, please update soon!
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So another General is ready to capture himself a pet, huh? or is Usagi gonna throw herself into Mamoru's bed for some sexual comfort? Well, either way, I look forward to it. Laters!