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Finally an update! That was great I think Jaedite is softening up to Mars and that's so cute. I can't wait til they get all of the other Senshis lol.

Love the story so far. I'd totally adore it if Jadite got hoist by his own petard and actually did fell in love with Mars. If the rest of the girls eventually figure out they are being played, that would be great too. Then they can get even in every way possible. (Remember the saying 'Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned ....' just imagine the fury they'll feel towards the guys that played them).

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i enjoyed it alot, nice power play, and good descriptive scenes. plus it's sailormoon and we can always use a bit more sailormoon fanfiction if you ask me.

Well, at least Mina's starting to realize she's being totally played, that's something. But I'm betting Tenorite's gonna bag a girl in very short order. Though frankly I'd love to see one of these idiot try to bag Uranus or Neptune! And trying to bag Moon could definitely be more problematic at this juncture than it sounds! Well, until chapter 10, and as you say, hopefully sooner than this one. Laters.

This is a great story, with erotic scenes and a suspensefull plot! I wonder when cute litte Ami will get her turn. Do you think you could have her get surprise-fucked (raped) with her uniform still on?

Well thus far, Sir Pork of the Chops Express the eighth, I have found this story to be highly arousing in all the right parts, while not lacking in notable plot content. The only thing I found startling is the ease with which The Fire Mistress accepts her fate. She seemed to be possessed of a strong, proud spirit, prior to her defeat. I would have thought she would require more time, or ‘punishment’ before becoming so complacent. Well I shall have to pick up where I left off (chapter five) later today, as I am notably lacking in sleep. – Silly Hats Only- Raphaella Von’Mercer

I really hope you update soon. It's so sweet that Jadite's more softer with rei I hope they do fall in love.

great chapter even though the collar prevents it from happening I think it would be cute if they had a baby together

lol venus is so gullible

I hope you update soon