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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see if Jaedite gets caught in his own trap and actually begins to fall for his prisoner. It seems like Mars has fallen for him to a degree .. though it could just be a case of Stockholm Syndrome setting in.
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's nice to see that those two are going to join the "party". Lord knows, the others could use the help! And I found the "scientific" dissertation on the Dark Kingdom interesting. I look forward to the next chapter. Laters.
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You could have fooled me with all the Physics talk. I did take some Physics in university, but that didn't help me much. The consentual yuri came out well, so props to you there. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I been reading our story you are great at this. I want to know will he ever know that they were together in past. Will he remember the love they had for eachother. What about the scouts do they know that sailor mars is missing. I would liketo see these two to be together like a couple Jadiete was really good to her when he served the prince. I would like him and the scouts to be allis but not so soon. But would like him to remember sooner than later.
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it was quite believable. It gets tricky to figure the characters out when you put them in such extreme situations. There's still a hint of the old Mars there, hating the leash, but for the most part she's been pretty beaten mentally. I think you did a great job on both her and Jadeite's characterizations.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it was fairly believable. And is Jadeite actually starting to fall in love with her there? Ooh, that'll put a crimp in his plans. And frankly just the thought of Usagi at Zaherite's "mercy" frightens me, especially considering the potential time paradox that would erupt as a result. And yet, I look forward to the possibility of more Senshi being taken prisoner before the end. Until next chapter, Laters.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You wouldn't know how happy i am. You've updated :) I like the Mars bit more than the Venus bit. Hope it will still be 'Mar concentrated' on the next chp.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I can't explain why i like it so much but this fic is one i look forward to reading. good Luck on the exams and come back swinging with another rockin chapter.
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that I like mars side of the story better but this story is just as good as the first one that I read from you. Thanks. Keep up the good work.
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this one a lot more then your other story. The consensual slave is a rarity that is not often explored in this way. I love how Rei and Minako are at opposite ends of the spectrum and can't wait to see what comes next. The pacing is very good and the back-story makes this feel like an offshoot of the cannon. Best of luck to you on this and your other story.