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Nice! It was a good idea to bring in the OCs, they add background to the Dark Kingdom as well as showing that the plot doesn't focus only on Jaedite. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I enjoyed reading your story it is great. As I was reading it I can really picture the characters in my mind great job. Keep up the good work. When are you gonnna up date.

Ah, the old subtle brainwashing/conditioning ploy, a classic. I almost pity poor Minako-Chan. Almost. So now the question is, "Will anyone else make a go at the few remaining Senshi still at liberty?" Can't wait to find out. Hopefully in chapter 7. Laters.

.Amazing chapter. Omg. You have no idea
That was awesome. Not to mention incredibly hot. I really admire your ability to write. Excellent chapter!
Showing his pure lust for her is intoxicating and you write it well.
Can you please update the story because I have to know what will happen next.

Love this story. I think it is really good and highly believable. I hope you continue it, I think it has a lot of potential. Wonderful, darling! Just wonderful

omg omg omg omg omg! this has got to be the best i've read its im speechless and i need more, and omg ur not done, and omg this is great and omg pplleassse update . ur writing is magnificent, and wonderful, i was drawn into everything, your writing is great!

LLLOOOOVVVEEEE LLLOOOVVVVEEE LLLOOOOVVVVEEEE! Love it so much!! hell u rock the world hard wit ur smokin hot story!! there's nothing more hot than male dom and slave master thing! i'm soo into it,and so loving this story. post the next chapter please =) I'll be da first to read

Jaedite is hot i love him! i'm not a fans of rei hino bcoz her charachter is stubborn and rough (i like usagi or minako) but its good to have jaedite tamed her fiery nature.
I think what makes the sex hot is because he hate her wit pure hatred,hell he can kill her antime he want but he decided to fuck her senseless instead.If i were rEI,i will submit to jaedite before he even try to kill me lol I was very dissapointed when jaedite died (in the cartoon version).just dont kill him please. i have a serious crush on him. I hope the sailor coudnt resque rei.

Great Job.I will give u 5 stars for your masterpiece of work.

keep up the good work