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Love the latest chapter, especially Minako getting the diamond necklace mixed up with pearl necklace. Very in character of her.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Of course, Jadeite's got a slightly unfair advantage, since he already knew who Mars was, and also knows who Mercury and Moon are, having gleaned their true identities just before his last battle with them, but that's neither here nor there at the moment, isn't? So, Mina's been prostituting herself? Wouldn't have pegged her for it, but, okay. Not that it matters now... Well, two down, four to go(I'm counting Chibiusa for the moment), seven if you count Mamoru, Haruka, and Michiru. I look forward to chapter 6. Laters.

very interesting work. a pretty good read. I only had a few issues with the plot but other than that this was pretty good.

I like this. I honestly wasn't expecting too, but I'm a sucker for anything Shitennou related, and was I happily surprised. I look forward to the next chapters.

Wow, this is an incredibly good story so far. I am eagerly awaiting more!

An interesting beginning, sir. I find myself curious for more and wanting to see just how far he'll break poor Rei-Chan before the proverbial calvary arrives - unless, of course, Variscite captures the others first, if i'm right in guessing that's what he's planning. Though right now neither seem to be taking Uranus and Neptune into account, as they, too, are still active, just out of town. Pluto and Saturn aren't much of a problem to them, sadly, the former being currently dead and the latter, more literally than one might expect, back in diapers. And Tux., well, the girls really should have thought to give him a communicator...

All them aside, you, yourself, PorkChopExpress, seem to have forgotten a Senshi when you had them respond to the fake call for help from Rei - as this clearly takes place between SMS and SMSS, as indicated by the mention of Pharaoh 90 and neither of the last two major baddies that followed him, Sailor Chibimoon should still be around! Okay, I have no idea how she'd be worked into this, but still, Chibiusa should be accounted for at the very least.

Well, looking forward to the next chunk(or two, or three, or more). Laters!

It's great! Will Jaedite slave other Senshi? I wanna know more! Plz dun let me wait too long. Hope you'll up date soon.