rate_review Reviews

Wow. Alot of people have been commenting lately. I thought the story was stopped. Is it?

i think a mpreg would be a great new starter uppper.. I mean, like, it would bring a whole new veriety of problems and what not, right. and they r basically pre-written. you know how pregnancy goes, all you have to do is put a personality to it.

i'm not 1 4 long mess, so i'll say 1 thing nice nd 1 that cud b better. 1)nice plot. 2) the trinket thing was a cliche. thats it.

i've got something to get rid of your writers block!! How about a male pregnancy!! It would be sooooooooooooo good!! If riki had iason's baby now, it would be ivander's brother/sister and his nephew. it would be iason's kid/step grand child. and lastly it would riki's child/step brother. i'm really dramatic but it could be really good!!

NICE STORY. IM NOT REALLY INTO THIS TYPE OF STUFF BUT MY FRIENDS AND I ARE REALLY CLOSE AND SHE WAS SO PASSIONATE ABOUT THIS STORY THAT I DECIDED TO READ IT FOR HER SAKE. I'M GLAD I DIDNT WASTE MY TIME OR SHE WOULD'VE REGRETTED TELLING ME!! YOU SAVED HER LIFE, LOL. ANY WHO, I SAW SOME OF MY FRIENDS ALREADY LEFT COMMENTS, WE'ER ALL GOOD FOR THAT. I MEAN IF YOU TOOK THE TIME TO WRITE AND I TOOK THE TIME TO READ, YOU'D WANT SOME FEEDBACK RIGHT? SO, I LIKE THE SEX SCENE. VERY GOOD, AND I THINK THE PLOT IS REALLY NICE. BY THE WAY ALLOF US ARE ADVANCE PLACEMENT ENGLISH STUDENTS SO WE KNOW HOW DISSECT US A STORY, LOL. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

I like how you put earth at the ending with black people being mongrels. I know the way i compliment you makes it seem like i'm racist but i'm not, ok? i just thought it was a nice effect type thing.

my friend kept telling me about this story recently and how i had to comment. i was like 'oooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkk! just shut up!!' i finally read it ( hasn't been that long actually) and i must say, its kinda good. you haven't updated in so long and i'm not sure if your dead or what but... i'm just saying, u should continue,ok?

what a great story so far... i wonder though. has it been discontinued??
Please start up again!!

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, i wonder if Iason will actually have to leave. Jupiter wont let him i'd bet. What's gonna happen now? omg cant wait for the next chapter! Please continue the story!!

I just noticed that I hadn't reviewed since the story first came out almost a year ago and I have to say: Gomennasai!! Hontou ni, gomennasai!! I am so sorry about that I will try to review after every chapter from now on.

Gomennasai.
Ryn