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for Taking Charge

by HaruhisKyon

schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"I love you when you make sense"
This part made it all worth reading.

Short & sweet. I don't feel as though the characters were broken, and you certainly didn't "overdo" Haruhi's character, a mistake which is made too often. All-in-all, I like it. Well done.

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