rate_review Reviews

There's a realism to this story that you don't find in many place, it was really well done. I liked the way it started out almost as a relief of tension, only to become more (or at least the foreshadowing of more) when Fai's mask was removed. And the last line of the second chapter was so poignant...

I've been looking for a cannon-ish KuroFai fic like this for a long time. I've read several smut fics but none of them had the dynamics of what Kuro-tan and Fai's relationship would be like. I am sad to see that you haven't continued this story in a long while, I think that it is very worth while, and with current developments in the story, you will have much more materal to work with. As a writer you tell the cannonized story precisely while convaying what you wanted to with Kuro-pu's point-of-view. All of it is well done, and I hope to see more in the future...that is, if you ever decide to continue.

I love it! such a good fanfic! i like the way you made it fit between the plot it makes it seem even more real , i really hope to see more chapters of this fanfic im gonna keep a close eye on it, please update soon ^_^

Awesome! I hope to see more soon!

I hate to break it to you Kurogane but you are already falling for Fai.

Awwwwwsome. The little snippets are great and fit in the cracks very well just as you intended. And the lemon was wonderful. I especially appreciated Fai's masks dropping in the heat of the moment. Very nice piece.

Oh, and I just figured out with this installment where the name of the fic came from. I like it.

Ah, that was great. So what will actually happen when Fai is sober?