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Freaking WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This and two other stories on here are tied for the place of best and HOTTEST fic i have read on adultfanfiction.net and i am uber eager to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!

I first found this story over at the Ranma Lemon Archive while looking for a Ranma / Sailor Moon crossover lemon. (Still haven't found a good Ranma / Minako one... sigh...) Anyway, I enjoyed this story so much I wanted to drop you a line and say so. I feel a little short-changed that you never did the Sayuri initiation-into-her-powers scene, unlike Yuka (or is that yet to happen?) -- what can I say, I like girls with pony tails :D -- but I like the plotting and the hot sweaty action of your story, not to mention the fact that it's an ongoing Ranma lemon; too many promising works seem to just stop after a while. The buildup to the Nabiki scene was incredible (17 chapters!), but the way you've built up the characters makes it plain that the whole thing is not going to stop with one roll in the hay. So far your story hasn't been about just the sex, and that's what makes it a great read. I'll be sure to check often to see if you've updated.

Great story. Much more plot than the average aff.net story. Well written, and interesting. More attention to detail than I've seen in most fics. Continuous plot line is quite excellent. It may be more difficult to sustain the plot now that the main character now lacks a somewhat immediate overarching goal. You've left many subplot threads out there to work with - hopefully you'll be able to find something useful to drive the plot for another arc. Good Fic.