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Okay...I'm just having some serious issues with Hideaki's personality. He's completely more domineering and manipulative and quite frankly can be a bit of a bastard in the anime and manga. He's certainly not the soft-hearted seemingly fragile uke that you've made him out to be. I honestly can't see anyone other than maybe Niwa topping him...and you made _Kaoru_ of all people do so. This concept is proposertous to me, as he would never let that happen. I suppose you can characterize them however you want (since it's your own story and your own interpretation), but next time it needs a huge OOC warning for nit-picky people like me.

What a wonderful series of Gakuen Heaven stories--and another one on the way!!! Your notes make me want to play the game even more!! This is really a beautiful contrast to the first story--particularly the use of the names to make clear how much more sensitive Karou is. I really loved to see Hide getting some loving treatment. The elbow and knee references were great. I put a few lines in a scene I wrote recently about a knee, but inspired by this, I may have to do more with knees and elbows in another chapter. I'm glad you posted this--thanks for the wonderful series! I hope you and your partner write many more!!