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February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's all that I can say after reading Belongings. I think that you really brought out the internal conflict that Nami was going through.
Even though its labeled as a one shot i'd love to see a continuation :)
Even though its labeled as a one shot i'd love to see a continuation :)
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
geez. random thoughts keep popping up in my head every day that are all spawning from this story! a common one would be: since she ended up going with him anyway, what if she really was pregnant??? what woulda happened after she started to show, and if she (somehow) hid it, I'm sure after 9 months there would've been a liiiittle problem >.>;; The plot bunnies have been bugging me so much, holding up cute little signs saying "type it type it" ;; but woe is me! even if i got your permission to write such a story, I wouldn't be able to write it worth $%*^ T-T thankyou for writing it btw. i do so appreciate a piece of good work amongst the others. ^^b
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oo Nami doesn't mind spawning an idiots child. xD j/k This was cute! Loved it to the end~
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If you don't mind, I'd appreciate if you'd continue the story.
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh beautiful a nice citrus from space.
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story, characters in character. I love One Piece. The only thing the real show lacks is relationship development. Maybe some day...
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I realize that you labeled this as a one shot, but I still think that you should continue! I mean, what would have happened if Nami ended up carrying Luffy's baby at such an early stage in the anime/manga? It would make a great fic, it really would.
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot hot hot hot hot. this was very good little story. could almost continue after the arlong park arc and carry on through the skypeia arc. but i loved it. there are so few luffyxnami stories. they are honestly my favorites.
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was amazing. One of the best lemons I've ever read. You're great at this.
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a good one shot. I'm the top that hates certain words. So I could have done without them. However, I did like this story. Thanks for sharing it with me! XD I thought it was .... can't quite find the word...about how she wanted to take a piece of him with her. However, she didn't want him to know about it. It's not sweet...I think it's sad yet...beautiful? O.o Anyways, great one shot! Thanks! :D