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by Confession68

person Kimisa
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WTF?!?!?!?! I still think you are a cruel writer! Made me cry again!
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After chap. 6 I think i will become crazy hahaha

Amazing fanfic... Hidoi writer!! xP
person Kimisa
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
?!?!?!?!?!? Ok, you got me to tears again! Hell! ><

Its really Luffy... and im still crying! How cruel... And yeah you made me doubt... (finish chapter 8)

You are a fantastic writer!! Even if its a cruel one hahahah
person Kimisa
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I finish the first chapter only now... and hell yeah, you got my tears... lot of then really...

what a hidoi (cruel) person you are! hahaha I'm kidding, you are a great writer! Even if i depressed because of Luffy, the way you wrote this chapter was amazing... For sure i will comment more... ahhaha

Love it!
person Kimisa
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Done chapter 2!! I thought writer-sama would like more comments along the story... and i can be more exactly doing it chapter by chapter...

Well, I'm reeeeeally scary... I mean Jin may be, or may be not... If i still hold onto this little hope will i suffer later?! i think I'm scary of the writer's evilness... ahhahaha

Well, i will read some more... Amazing story!! ^^
person Kimisa
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
done chapter 3! xP

Its good to have Nami back, but that "good-bye Luffy" stole my tears again! What a cruel thing... .___.

Well, i think i liked the doctor best than Desini... dont like her teasing Jin... but not dislike her at all. xD

Still a great writer ne, Writer-sama? ^^
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i have to say this: this was one of the best stories i ever read! i'll admit there was a time somewhere in the middle of it, i though "wtf?!", but now that i read it all, i absolutely loved it!the plot was really good. i hope that i'll be able to reed more of your stuff! please continue! ^^

XD
person scaragh
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack. This is just such a good story. It makes me want to print it, bind it, and stick it on my bookshelf, since it's as good or better than most of the novels already there. Thanks so much for writing this. It's intelligent and sexy and heartbreaking and funny and in sync with the One Piece universe. And it's certainly the indefinite Luffy/Nami story! Thanks again!
person Riz
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoooo!! It's over!! I FINALLY FINISHED!!! Yaaaay!! I LOVED this story! It made me cry like a baby at times and then laugh my arse off. Other times it pissed me off to no end and then others confuse the hell out of me xD I basically gave up trying to figure out what was going on but you never lost me in the abyss of confusion you had set up. Mainly, I just sat there and enjoyed the emotional ride xD lol

FANTASTIC JOB!! I love your Luffy and Nami! xD

Thank you for the addicting read. I'm glad I got to read the story in it's entirety and read about 3 chapters a day then 2 or 1 a day as I got up to the last 4 chapters ;) I kind of didn't want it to end xD lol

Thank You again! Bye!

person Goddess of death
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg! i absolutly LOVED your fanfic!!!! it took me 3 days to read it (i even stayed up till 2am reading XD) but its been one of the best Nami x Luffy fics i've ever read! well written, well paced and plot-twists galore!! *salutes* thank you so much for posting your fic, otherwise i would have missed out on such a great story!!! ^___^V
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awsome awsome story really enjoyed it and loved the idea of belonging to one another and not needing permission. I do finally feel complete now since this story has come to an end. That is a pretty fucked up ability to have if you can get a chance to use it. Really liked how this thing ended in true One Piece fashion of Luffy saying something incredibly stupid and paying for from his crew. Great job on this.

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