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by Confession68

schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fuckin' finally!
God, I hope you explain things soon. Drivin' me nutso.
But I still love it, nonetheless. *heart*
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
It lacks the suspense of the previous chapters, but is still good nonetheless.
Seems as though Luffy is currently not entirely himself.
<3
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH!
This is one of those moments...
When I get confused again.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

..

<3
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP YOU ARE EEEVVVIIIILLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You better update a lot sooner than last time!
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope the 20th chapter isn't taking so much longer than the others because I said I thought I knew where the story was going!
Pleeeease, you don't have to surprise us!
If it would make you feel better, I take back what I said! I don't know where this is going! Not a clue!
*cries* Please update!
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy this chapter more, but I think you should have gone into what they were feeling whilst making love. I bet there would have been a great deal of confusion there as well.
For instance, was Nami still physically a virgin?
Still a bit frustrated, but I'm starting to get an idea of where this is going. :o)
person Noodles
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh I love it and I its fun trying to think of the different ways you could resolve this hmmmm but of course you always manage to delightfully surprise me yay much loves Noodles who is still suffering from the same bloody problem
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man this is an awsome story but now that it seems Nami has recovered or she's been dreaming this whole time or Luffy has. I don't know what's happening and it's scaring me! My brain feels like a bee hive! I mean just when the story was over it seemed like a new one began! You have to finish this story or at least explain what the fuck is going on! If not for my sake then for the children. Won't someone please think of the children!
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited for the next chapter!
It's starting to feel like everything will be explained and I'm not nearly as frustrated as I have been.
Yay! No one's dead!
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yays! Another chapter!
Sorry I was so harsh in my last review... the constant confusion just gets irritating.
Top notch chapter, btw!
Update asap!

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