rate_review Reviews

*projectile nosebleeds*

Holy flying monkeys, that was awesome. Love it.

good story

Wow! I don't read many Mello/Near stories just because they never seem to attract me. But what got me first was the summary, it made me wonder and really wanna read it. I'm glad I did. Wow this story was really nicely written. There was a spelling error or two, but nothing that took away from the story itself. And wow the whole thing was beautifully written!

Wow, I myself don't usually like the MelloxNear pairing, but this one was very good! It's well written with a plot thrown into a somewhat short amount of space. And, the sex scene is very well written! (heheh, I'm having to absorb as much as I can so I myself can get better at yaoi scenes!)
It would be really cool if you continued this, I think it could go on to be a really good chapter story! (or is it already meant to become a chapter story?...if not, well...like I said, it would be a really good chatper story.)

you write very well from near's pov, other then a few spelling mistakes this fic was perfect :D!