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September 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Most Excellent.
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April 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story.
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February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, it was very touching and I know this can happen as in reality it's suprising where some people find true love.
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a great story, i have to admit that the OC was a great choice for keitaro. To be honest i didnt think it would work but in the end, it was a great story.
check ya later,
Enyaw Shadows
check ya later,
Enyaw Shadows
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just simply outstanding. I always love reading your stories, but this one...goddamn.. Really takes the cake. Best fanfic I've read on this site, bar none.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic,
I'm a huge fan.
hope to see more fic's from you
I'm a huge fan.
hope to see more fic's from you
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your work man! Spoils of Wars was awesome, is there going to be a sequel? Also PLEASE PLEASE continue Loss and Redemtion! One of the best fanfics i have ever read.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another excelent work. I can't remember ever reading, any, fanfic where the lead ends up with an "escort". Very original and believeable. I give it 3 out of 5, only because of the acc.
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow.... that was truly amazing, man. By far in the top ten I've read on this site in terms of story/plot, sex scenes, intrigue and the intricate mix of how they fit together. I was totally into it within minutes, and the idea itself is unusual but amazing as well. It's hard to write OCs, moreso ones that fit into a story well, and you did that and a lot more besides. The other thing I really enjoyed in this one, and something that made it different from most others (especially Love Hina fics) is that you marginalized the entire 'harem' section of Hinata house in such a way that made it real and believable without becoming excessive or awkwardly written. They were simply sideline characters to a love story. Honestly, I appreciated that a whole lot more than seeing the normal requisite multiple chapters of antics and hijinks meant to break the couple apart until it either works or fails miserably. No.. this was calm, pleasant and a true pleasure to read. I know I haven't been good about reviewing in most cases, though I've followed your other works regularly and loved them all, but I think this one truly stands out for being different and unique, in a good way. Thank you for writing these stories for our enjoyment. It's appreciated more than you know.