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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing! I feel you've captured their voices and timing. I especially liked the sincere promise of Yohji -- "Tell me you don't want this and I'll stop." Sometimes I think he is as repressed as Aya but in a different way. The only-slightly-resolved sexual tension keeps the action on a sharp edge and steam-rolling forward. Just the perfect length. Something fresh for once.