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This was awesomeness. I loved your premise (I've never seen it anywhere else, btw) and thought the characters were perfectly in voice. Excellent, amusing and altogether yummy! Good job!!!

what a cute story. you did a fine job.

Oh, this one made me laugh! It was a cute mix of funny, sexy and spooky. As to characterization, you're doing great. Loved your Hakkai, Gojyo, Lirin and Yaone. Goku... is maybe portrayed as a touch too childish. Although I do realize why it works for you to have him being instructed by the others at the end, rather than having him read and understand for himself.

Great work, and thanks for sharing!

Very sexy, and lots of fun to read. I like your Gojyo and his rationalizations. And using Lirin and Dr. Nii made sense. :) Thanks for sharing!

Oh, dear gods! That was GREAT. This was so much fun to read and I needed a good laugh. Thanks.