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*blinks* *howls with laughter*

Oh lord! A Teenage!Brad and a Blushing!Schu! So wonderful and beautiful!

Please keep writing this wonderful crack. I fall in love with it again with each chapter.

*cackles* Oh lovely. *snickers* Never bet Schu when he's bored.... he'll win.

Darn, it's going to be sad to see how they'll all have to go back to being adult assassins eventually when this all wears off, and then they can't be friends and play any more. Life ain't fair! Thanks for updating! I really like this side of the boys! You seem to understand young minds so well!

Awww, I'm almost sorry to see them growing up again. I hope Brad and Yohji's plan comes to fruition. Good chapter. Even as children/older boys/young adults they seem to gravitate to the ones they will be closest to as adults.

*snickers* Aw... kiddie Brad is sweet and his talk with Yohji is the begining of a beautiful friendship. I just know it.

*snerks* and the idea of Brad taking out the other teens is one to make even Farf smile for a while.

I've just found this and had to let you know what great fun I had reading it! The older members as kids are so cute, but I can still see how Crawford grew up to be the man he became. Seems that even as a kid he liked to get his own way and as he's grown up he's simply replaced physical biting with its psychological equivalent.

Anyway, this is a good, fun read and I'm looking forward to more.

Exactly how do you get so good at crack? Thank the gods your are so prolific because too many of us would be jones for our next fix... damn crack peddlers! I love how you summed up lil Brad and lil Schu in so few words. 'Soft souled' lil Schu was probably one of the most poignant and potent descriptions of our favorite sociopath, those few words clearly pointing to the horror his life must have been to turn him into his adult self. And Brad as tyrannical toddler tyrant - fitting and perhaps a bit predictable EXCEPT in the 'my crybaby' and 'I woulda.' Possessive, protective and in the last chapter... clearly homicidal even as a child. Somehow I found that entirely chilling. If he did get his hands on his gun as a kid, he still wouldn't hesitate to pull the trigger. I could clearly see that piercing hollow glacial stare on his little face. Monsters aren't always made... some are just born. I'd love to see you pull that same attention to character detail to Aya and Yohji - they've had their moments but I challenge you to stop me dead like your Brad and Schu did. Come on woman... need my fix... don't leave a sister hanging...

Two chapters in and laughing my ass off...

"MY crybaby" aww!!

oh, I love the "camping!" But...is that it?

MORE!!