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Platypus, that rocked! I'm not into this fandom but I liked this story!

And of course (sorry this is a second review) you might wanna fix your disclaimer before someone else catches ya ..... I'm an archive moderator here so it's my job to tell people to fix stuff lol (you can delete this if you want) so I'm just going to paste my normal thing for ya ....

A Friendly Reminder

Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.

Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.

Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!

Feel free to remove this once the problem is corrected. Thanks ^_^

[Haha that is so weird, but it needs to be fixed and it's bugging me, so I had to say something!!!!!!]

Hey nice! :P

Very nice! I love the humor you place in the story. Sarah's internal struggle and interactions with Able make it very realistic...its easy to put yourself in the story. Please keep going Im very curious to find out what will happen next!