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for The Dance

by jeisvenka

person Kanashii Kopper
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:) Apparently Ken and Schuldig need to get laid! Thank you for posting!
person Arakune
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had read your story before I got an account on this site, and I fell in love with it. I love your imagery and your words flow absolutely perfectly. Keep up the good work. -Still re-reads this story often, actually.- xD
person Ikippiki
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It's original and well written. I found it real interesting and... HOT!
The only thing I think is missing is what happened to Aya, Ken and Omi (in more details...).
Please continue with the good work!
person Hestia
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS!!! Chapter 1 was exciting and hot! Chapter--OMG!! I'm looking forward to reading the rest, but I wanted to review now to say how good this was. I don't care if Jei is OOC, I love him this way! Personally in mind that's how he really is!

person Hestia
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Wonderful Chap. 5! I hated Jei's room--how awful! I loved the romance of the last chapter and the humor with Schuldig. Nice bit with Aya and Crawford! I can't wait to read your others!
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful read.
Although... I wouldn't have minded a lengthly additional scene of Yohji bottoming. ;D

Seriously, though. I remember reading the first few chapters a while back, and was really excited to see this continued.
person Tsunao
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, you have just made my day. I have never really thought of the possibility of this pairing as doable, but man, was I prove wrong. That was just plain hot. Though, I would love to see the part where Youji get taken. That would have been burning.
person luvsjazz
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the story so far. I hope you continue. I like the Yohji/Farf pairing. There just isn't enough (any?) of it out there.
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. [aka: Wow. Uhm. HOT. XD]

...and really, the series never really fully explored the possibility of him suddenly finding himself with feelings for another man (XD). Who can say he wouldn't have turned into a big, fluffy, kiss-demanding kitten? XDD
At least... that's always the way that I'd like to think things would go in that scenario. Lol. [That's only because I like to pretend EVERYONE is a big, fluffy, kiss-demanding kitten... especially when they clearly shouldn't be. ^^;]

Anyway. I LOVED the fluff at the end.
It was really sweet.
I'm really hoping you continue this.
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story so far! I'd love to see where it goes.. please continue. ^___^

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