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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...wow... This is easily one of the best stories that I've ever read, coorelated to poke'mon or otherwise. Especially in the regard that you can portray the feelings of two confused and...tragic... teenagers so accurately(Well, all things considered when relating to Psymakio, but, you get my point).
...But I have a question or two... See, I'm not a regular to this site, and usually I don't take that much time to read fanfic, but this kinda caught my eye, and since I'm the kind of person who always likes to think of... possibilities(after reading the material of course), a few questions linger.
It seems that the Shadow so far can only corrupt poke'mon, and use their bodies like living puppets, but is there a way that the Shadow can... Manifest itself? Such as having a "Tendril", per say, or a physical entity wielding any kind of portion of it's powers(or all of it)?
Also... If Miyako was the First gardevoir, and if her child was killed inside of her womb... how does the species exist to the present date...? I know you've probably got some clever explanation for it... but I had to ask(though, with my luck, it'll end up as curiosity killin' da cat).
Those questions aside, however, this is an extremely good(and highly original) story. Pleeeeease keep up the good work!
...But I have a question or two... See, I'm not a regular to this site, and usually I don't take that much time to read fanfic, but this kinda caught my eye, and since I'm the kind of person who always likes to think of... possibilities(after reading the material of course), a few questions linger.
It seems that the Shadow so far can only corrupt poke'mon, and use their bodies like living puppets, but is there a way that the Shadow can... Manifest itself? Such as having a "Tendril", per say, or a physical entity wielding any kind of portion of it's powers(or all of it)?
Also... If Miyako was the First gardevoir, and if her child was killed inside of her womb... how does the species exist to the present date...? I know you've probably got some clever explanation for it... but I had to ask(though, with my luck, it'll end up as curiosity killin' da cat).
Those questions aside, however, this is an extremely good(and highly original) story. Pleeeeease keep up the good work!
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHAT OVER NINE THOUSAND THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving the new chapter, Slash. Worth the wait as always.
Having Slash explain everything him and his pack have been through to Flannery really makes you realise just how far he's come. I think I'm going to go back and read this from the start at some point.. it's almost been a year since I started reading.
Having Slash explain everything him and his pack have been through to Flannery really makes you realise just how far he's come. I think I'm going to go back and read this from the start at some point.. it's almost been a year since I started reading.
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Double review, but I had to voice my musing;
As much as it would drive me insane as a reader, if I were writing this, I would make Flannery's pack and Slash's pack part ways without either of them figuring out each other's secret. So close but so far sort of thing.
As much as it would drive me insane as a reader, if I were writing this, I would make Flannery's pack and Slash's pack part ways without either of them figuring out each other's secret. So close but so far sort of thing.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A fine chapter and i like the end where they are being looked at XD fuckign goosebumps and shit man! Good fucking job I cant wait to read more oyu rock dude!
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Long time lurker, first time reviewer; so this goes pretty for anything "Sinner"-related you have uploaded on this page:
I love the whole story. not only me but also the ladies i live with. we pretty much check each day for updates; sometimes multiple times a day. if things get boring we often enough hook the laptop to the projector and read the first arc and older chapter together just because we like it that much.
All in all it's pretty much the ONLY Pokemon story we have ever looked up 'cause a friend told me to check it out. I personally love how you use the "kiddy background" to attack a few of the many flaws of our society. I wish I were able to do it in such a quality as you do..... oh well, nobody's perfect.
The one thing that makes me wonder the most, besides wondering where you will take this all, is how you managed to think of the Pokemon team. I wonder what made you choose the specific Pokemon (though not so much with Gardevoir, that is clear). I tried to find a pattern or a theme but so far i failed to do so. would be kind of neat if you could share some of your thoughts on that with me.
anyway, keep up your very good work and i hope for a bit more.... frequent updates in the future; but you go by the pace that fits yourself.
- Nelo Akuma
I love the whole story. not only me but also the ladies i live with. we pretty much check each day for updates; sometimes multiple times a day. if things get boring we often enough hook the laptop to the projector and read the first arc and older chapter together just because we like it that much.
All in all it's pretty much the ONLY Pokemon story we have ever looked up 'cause a friend told me to check it out. I personally love how you use the "kiddy background" to attack a few of the many flaws of our society. I wish I were able to do it in such a quality as you do..... oh well, nobody's perfect.
The one thing that makes me wonder the most, besides wondering where you will take this all, is how you managed to think of the Pokemon team. I wonder what made you choose the specific Pokemon (though not so much with Gardevoir, that is clear). I tried to find a pattern or a theme but so far i failed to do so. would be kind of neat if you could share some of your thoughts on that with me.
anyway, keep up your very good work and i hope for a bit more.... frequent updates in the future; but you go by the pace that fits yourself.
- Nelo Akuma
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good one. I thought the whole see-who-catches-the-others-first thing was pretty funny, and apparently Slash/Psymakio lost, huh? :P
I'm anxious to see how true to your word you really are when you say "update soon" this time, and I'm hoping it really is fast, since the whole Falarbor incident seems like it's only going get even faster-paced from here.
I wonder what Blaze will do with this information though... *evil grin*
I'm anxious to see how true to your word you really are when you say "update soon" this time, and I'm hoping it really is fast, since the whole Falarbor incident seems like it's only going get even faster-paced from here.
I wonder what Blaze will do with this information though... *evil grin*
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April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I swear to god dude, you have gotta be the biggest cock tease on this site. XD
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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! Other than it being short, it's still an outstanding chapter. Definitely worth the long wait. Sure hope you put up the next chapter soon.
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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, but I was hoping for something more, I guess. Though I don't know what exactly either :)
The scene between Slash and Gardevoir at the end was cute.
Now, I guess I'll waith for the next update and hope to figure out what exactly I'm expecting :)
The scene between Slash and Gardevoir at the end was cute.
Now, I guess I'll waith for the next update and hope to figure out what exactly I'm expecting :)